Thursday, 18 February 2016

the black bird

I remember
Where the  blackbirds tweet saying "It's hot."
They sit in the tree’s shade to stay cool.

Where lichen sticks to the trees,

Where the leaves fall
making the tree look old.

Where roses sit in the garden
moving in the wind.

I am learning to use my book to write my ideas on the computer.
I am going well because I have been writing and trying my best.

My next steps is to use only one space between words.


  1. Great job you used strong words and I loved it and I can relate to it.

  2. Great job you I liked story about the black bird.